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Still, you need some improvements:
1) Voice acting was terrible. I could barely even hear a single thing.
2) Don't use so much plain tweening! Make something move w/ FBF while he is tweening.
3) Increase the frame rate.
And that's all. I had a couple of laughs, and it was pretty good. I look forward to your future submissisons.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :] I really appreciate it.
Yeah, the voice acting for the contestants was pretty bad. Eh.
And I'll try to use FBF a little more. Promise :D And I started that on 12 FPS, when I usually work with 24 -- I was too lazy to change it up.
Thank you for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
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That was even funnier than the original phoenix wrong!!
*blows frontpage whistle*
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except for some parts..
Graphics- Some blood physics were a little off, but I don't blame you, doing fbf blood ain't easy.
Style- you didn't completely rip off krinkels, you still had an original storyline and different graphics.
sound- helix6 is a great artist; don't mess with him.
violence- no, there is no violence at all. that's why I gave you a 10 </sarcasm>
interactivity- just for the _quality ="medium"; button.
humor- the last part when he growls and rips apart the gangleader made me laugh.
**pointers**
don't use so many of flash's built in filters; try to use more of an alpha in/out. you slow down the entire movie by those filters.
some of the physics were off.
overall: good job
4/5
-Deltatsunami
Author's Response:
Thank you! I will consider this review in my other current productions!
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"whoa! that's one f***ing good audio"
the title says it :D
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