Nice
Still, you need some improvements:
1) Voice acting was terrible. I could barely even hear a single thing.
2) Don't use so much plain tweening! Make something move w/ FBF while he is tweening.
3) Increase the frame rate.
And that's all. I had a couple of laughs, and it was pretty good. I look forward to your future submissisons.
Thanks! :] I really appreciate it.
Yeah, the voice acting for the contestants was pretty bad. Eh.
And I'll try to use FBF a little more. Promise :D And I started that on 12 FPS, when I usually work with 24 -- I was too lazy to change it up.
Thank you for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
Good job.
except for some parts..
Graphics- Some blood physics were a little off, but I don't blame you, doing fbf blood ain't easy.
Style- you didn't completely rip off krinkels, you still had an original storyline and different graphics.
sound- helix6 is a great artist; don't mess with him.
violence- no, there is no violence at all. that's why I gave you a 10 </sarcasm>
interactivity- just for the _quality ="medium"; button.
humor- the last part when he growls and rips apart the gangleader made me laugh.
**pointers**
don't use so many of flash's built in filters; try to use more of an alpha in/out. you slow down the entire movie by those filters.
some of the physics were off.
overall: good job
4/5
-Deltatsunami
Thank you! I will consider this review in my other current productions!
Fuckin beautiful
It made me cry... poor soldiers.
AWESOME USE OF PHOTOSHOP CS and Swift. The thing is that you should set your default quality to low, this movie was graphic INTENSive. (especially the bitmap smoke, it really killed my computers processor.)
The style was awesome, very original.
Graphics: top notch stick figures. nothing much to say.
Music, sound effects, voice acting: PWNAGE
violence: if you dont' know why I marked 10, u seriously are stupid.
humor: 0- I'm sorry, there was nothing funny about this. It was very tragic and sad...
overall:
Math.INFINTY! /10
I'll try to make it less graphic intense.
And yes I know why I got a 10 in violence :)
Humor, no there's none really.
Thank you
may I suggest something called..
... the ng alpha? Looks like a great movie, good use of fiilters and effects. But remember, Newgrounders don't judge fairly on trailers so I suggest you move to the NG Alphas (in the NG Mag section) and submit it there.
You actually caught my attention!
Look forward to the real thing.
me too
pretty good, but...
needs to be longer. Everything else was fine. It was funny ;)
Gee thanx! My next one will definately be much longer. I only wanted to do a small one because I wouldnt have much time on doing a big one for today! Dont worry, other ones will be longer! ^-^
NO! Absolutely NO!!
Seriously, I liked the music but you didn't stream it all the way to the end of the movie! And you called that an animation? I bet I could do the same what you did with MsPaint and Windows Media Player.... The graphics sucked (cuz they were sprites)! Now don't get me wrong, some sprite animations are good because they have a damn story! This, psh, a bicycle trips over and dies.. big deal! there was ABSOLUTELY no interactivity, not even a damn preloader! And was this supposed to be funny? Its funny that YOU SUCK!!!
try harder next time........ if there will be one....
DeltaTsunami
Yes, yes. I get what you mean. I am much better than what's displayed in that flash but it was created for the reason of being a part of a series of 8 bit mishaps on my buddy's site. It's okay if you didn't like it, I have been practicing in flash for a year and a half now and if I were to spend more than half-a-hour on an animation ( Although I do admit, my patience would stretch incredibly thing ) then it would come out more on... Your par?
LMAO!!!!
THAT WAS THE GREATEST FLASH MOVIE IN THE ENTIRE NEWGROUNDS HISTORY!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DUDE!!!
^.^
right, glad you liked it
rofl.
that was so good... curse everybody who says it is bad..
thanks
die
you should at least make a story
It does have a story. Just wait until Doki Doki Mario 1.2
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